Monday, May 2

little by little one thing wants


central park, new york city



I left my magnetic north on an evening of little by little one thing wants. I wrote many gold-handled lists, day waves and night waves of early waking and morning color, and my heart said 'ready.'


The thing I like about trains and subways is that I have the ability to do all the things I want to be doing when I'm driving my car ~ rummaging in my purse, applying chapstick, writing down that thing so I don't forget it, daydreaming, collecting words and writing snatches of poetry. I wrote the above sitting at the philadelphia train station this afternoon.


On last night's subway, wrapped in the warm underground air, I pulled out Pablo Neruda's Captain's Verses and read a few pages, and then was unexpectedy treated to an older gentleman across the aisle leaning towards me and reciting, in spanish, the first few lines of Neruda's twentieth poema di amor.



Puedo escribir los versos más tristes esta noche.
Escribir, por ejemplo, "La noche está estrellada
y tiritan, azules, los astros, a lo lejos."


Tonight I can write the saddest lines.
Write, for example, "The night is shattered
and the stars are blue and shiver in the distance."




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11 comments:

Paula said...

Beautiful words and poetry Brooke, and what a lovely subway moment to capture. I wonder if the reciting of poetry will become 'another' lost art one day. I hope not x

Artist in the Arctic said...

I love the mental image I'm left with of strangers connecting over Pablo Neruda's poetry - on the subway no doubt. And to hear it in spanish? Perfect. Thanks for sharing Brooke.

elizabeth said...

I so enjoyed reading your snatch of poetry.

What a lovely subway moment!

I can manage to apply chapstick and daydream while I'm driving, but I definitely could use the ability to write things down.

helen said...

Oh! I just went and told my husband about your subway moment of magic. What a beautiful experience.
I dream of learning Spanish because I so want to read his words.

Your poem gave joy ~

b_maria_why said...

gorgeous. your poetry is just lovely. and neruda is always a favorite. :)

Fiona said...

:) Love all this Brooke. I have to ask about your moccasins. Thrifted or do you have a source to share?

jennifer h. said...

this is now one of my favorite nyc stories ~ what a beautiful moment.

your poetry glistens...

Brooke said...

paula, I don't think it ever will. I really really hope not. It is just too important. I don't want Fahreneit 451 to come true!

amy, that experience was heart-rending in the most beautiful way.

elizabeth, okay, chapstick and daydreaming i can do too. Writing, only a stoplights.

helen, some of the neruda books show the poem in spanish on one side of the page, and in english on the other. It's a good way to learn. :)

b, thanks! :)

fiona, I asked her and they are Tory Birch, called the Belen Flat. But minnetonka has great moccs too.

jen, thank you kindly. :)

Fiona said...

Thanks for the info :)

Brooke said...

you're welcome. :)

erin said...

what a beautiful moment. It's rare. but NYC is filled with them.